
The Art of Explanation
10 minHow to communicate with clarity and impact
Introduction
Narrator: In the late 1990s, a young, unemployed Ros Atkins walked into the London offices of The Independent newspaper for a job interview. He had a letter of recommendation from a respected editor in South Africa and a head full of observations, but no clear way to articulate them. When the interviewer asked him what he hoped to achieve, Atkins delivered a disorganized, unfocused monologue. He failed to explain his ambitions, his skills, or his value. The interview was a disaster, and he didn't get the job. This moment of failure, however, became a catalyst. It highlighted a critical, often overlooked skill: the ability to explain oneself with clarity and impact.
In his book, The Art of Explanation, BBC journalist Ros Atkins transforms this personal and professional struggle into a powerful, systematic guide for anyone who needs to communicate. He argues that in a world saturated with information, the ability to cut through the noise isn't just a talent—it's a learnable skill, one that can be broken down, practiced, and mastered.
An Explanation Is a Deliberate Construction of Simplicity and Detail
Key Insight 1
Narrator: Atkins posits that a great explanation is not an accident; it is built upon a foundation of ten core attributes. The most crucial of these is simplicity. During a BBC training course, Atkins was struck by a phrase from veteran journalist Allan Little, who described complex language as creating "obstacles to comprehension." This reframed Atkins's entire approach. Simplicity wasn't just a stylistic choice; it was about actively removing anything—jargon, superfluous adjectives, long sentences—that could prevent an audience from understanding. The goal is to ask of every sentence, "Is this the simplest way I can say this?"
However, simplicity does not mean superficiality. It must be balanced with essential detail. Atkins challenges the long-held media belief that audiences have no appetite for depth. He points to his 2016 visit to YouTube's London offices, where data showed that users were, in fact, watching longer, more detailed videos. Outlets like Vox had already capitalized on this, building huge audiences with in-depth explanatory journalism. The lesson is that detail is the currency of explanation. The key is to be ruthless in distinguishing what is essential from what is merely interesting. As Atkins notes, every piece of non-essential information makes it harder for the essential information to be communicated.
A Great Explanation Provides Context and Maintains Engagement
Key Insight 2
Narrator: Information without context is just noise. An explanation fails if the audience doesn't understand why the subject matters. Atkins learned this lesson powerfully while presenting on the BBC World Service when news broke of the assassination of Salman Taseer, the Governor of Punjab Province in Pakistan. To a global audience unfamiliar with Pakistani politics, the event itself was just a headline. His colleague, Owen Bennett-Jones, came on air and delivered a masterclass in context. He spent less than a minute on the attack itself and the rest of the time explaining Pakistan's blasphemy laws, its fragile democracy, and its relationship with the West. He gave the audience the "why," transforming a distant event into a story of global significance.
Just as crucial as context is engagement. An explanation is useless if the audience tunes out. Atkins introduces the concept of the "dial test," which he learned about at a BBC audience research briefing in 2002. Researchers had participants listen to radio programs while turning a dial to indicate their level of enjoyment. The resulting data showed that attention wasn't just lost between segments, but could dip dramatically in the middle of a single story. This became a preoccupation for Atkins: spotting and fixing moments of weakness. He provides a stark example from a viral video he created in 2021 about the US withdrawal from Afghanistan. His editor, Andrew Bryson, identified a section in the middle that was losing momentum. By ruthlessly revising that one weak link—removing, adding, and rearranging elements—they ensured the explanation remained compelling, and the video went on to receive over a million views.
Tailor the Message to Build Credibility with the Audience
Key Insight 3
Narrator: Effective explanation is never a one-size-fits-all endeavor. It must be calibrated for a specific audience. Atkins emphasizes that before explaining anything, one must assess who the audience is, what they already know, and how they prefer to receive information. He recounts preparing for a 15-minute meeting with James Harding, the high-energy Director of BBC News. Knowing Harding was fast-paced and restless, Atkins meticulously trimmed his presentations down to their absolute essence. He delivered his first point in 45 seconds and his second in 90 seconds. Because he had tailored his explanation to his audience of one, the meeting was a success, and his requests were approved within weeks.
This tailoring is also fundamental to building credibility. If an audience doesn't believe in the messenger, they won't believe the message. Atkins illustrates this with the launch of the 50:50 Project, his initiative to increase the diversity of contributors in BBC content. To persuade journalists and producers to adopt the new system, he knew the pitch had to come from people they trusted. Therefore, the team making the case was composed entirely of other journalists and producers who understood the daily pressures of the newsroom. They could speak the same language and anticipate objections, which gave the project immediate credibility. This painstaking, audience-aware approach was key to the project's expansion from a single program to a global initiative adopted by organizations in over thirty countries.
A Systematic Process Tames Complexity and Enables Dynamic Response
Key Insight 4
Narrator: Atkins argues that the feeling of being overwhelmed by a complex topic is universal, whether it's a student facing a history essay or a professional preparing for a major presentation. The solution is a system. The book’s seven-step process—Set-up, Find, Distill, Organize, Link, Tighten, and Delivery—is designed to turn this chaos into clarity. A key step is distillation. Atkins uses the analogy of the Geevor Tin Mine in Cornwall, where raw ore was put through a mill to break it down and extract the valuable tin. Similarly, an explainer must put all their raw information through a "mill," discarding non-essential details until only the most valuable nuggets remain.
This system is not just for prepared speeches; it's also adaptable for unpredictable, dynamic explanations like interviews or Q&A sessions. For these situations, Atkins emphasizes the importance of verbalization. While preparing for live broadcasts on the 2017 Dutch elections, he found himself struggling for fluency. His solution was to walk around the square in The Hague, talking to himself, reciting the information on his phone until the words became familiar. This "front-loading" of the explanation freed up his mental capacity during the live broadcast to listen, think, and respond dynamically. By chunking information into pre-verbalized strands, he could access and assemble them on the fly, delivering a clear and coherent explanation under pressure.
Conclusion
Narrator: The single most important takeaway from The Art of Explanation is that clarity is a choice. It is the result of a deliberate, disciplined, and systematic process. It is not an innate gift reserved for a select few but a practical skill that can be developed through conscious effort. Atkins demystifies the process, showing that from a high-stakes presentation to a simple work email, the principles of good explanation remain the same.
The book leaves us with a powerful challenge. In an era defined by information overload and competing narratives, the ability to explain complex ideas simply and effectively is more than just a professional advantage; it's a vital tool for navigating the world. The next time you need to send an important email or explain a new idea, don't just write or speak. First, ask yourself: What is my purpose? Who is my audience? And what is the simplest, clearest, and most compelling way to give my explanation the best chance of success?