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Smart Brevity

11 min

The Power of Saying More with Less

Introduction

Narrator: Imagine being a top columnist at a major political publication, writing 1,600-word deep dives that everyone in Washington D.C. is talking about. You feel successful, influential, and widely read. Then, your publication installs a new analytics system, and you get to see the data for the first time. The data is brutal. It shows that 80 percent of your readers—the people you thought were hanging on your every word—never even click to the second page. They are consuming, at most, 490 of your 1,600 words before moving on. This humbling experience is not a hypothetical; it’s what happened to the authors of the book we’re exploring today. They realized the world had changed, but communication hadn't. This revelation led them to develop a new philosophy, a system for saying more with less. In their book, Smart Brevity, Jim VandeHei, Mike Allen, and Roy Schwartz provide a blueprint for cutting through the noise and making your message stick in a world that simply won’t wait.

Audience First: Confronting the Reality of the 8-Second Attention Span

Key Insight 1

Narrator: The foundational principle of Smart Brevity is a radical shift in mindset: communication is not about what you want to say, but about what the audience can actually hear. The authors argue that for decades, communication habits have been based on a world that no longer exists—a world before smartphones, infinite scrolling, and constant notifications. Today, we live in a state of information overload. Eye-tracking studies reveal that people spend an average of only 26 seconds reading a piece of online content, and our average attention span has plummeted to just eight seconds.

This reality was driven home for the authors at their previous company, Politico. They surveyed subscribers of Politico Pro, a premium service where clients paid tens of thousands of dollars for deep, niche reporting. The authors assumed these high-need readers would value long, exhaustive articles. The data proved them wrong. Only 5 percent of these dedicated subscribers said they valued longer stories the most. This was a "holy-shit" moment. Even the most engaged, information-hungry audience preferred brevity. The core lesson is to "adapt to how people consume content—not how you wish they did." This means abandoning the ego-driven desire to show off how much you know and instead focusing on respecting the audience's time and intelligence by delivering value as efficiently as possible.

The Core 4: A Replicable Structure for Impact

Key Insight 2

Narrator: Smart Brevity is not just a vague philosophy; it’s a replicable system with four core components designed to grab and hold attention. The authors learned the importance of structure through harsh experience. Early in his career at The Wall Street Journal, co-author Jim VandeHei proudly submitted a 1,200-word article to a veteran reporter named David Rogers for feedback. Rogers read it, looked up, and delivered a blunt verdict: "It's a pile of shit." He then took a pencil and restructured the entire piece, teaching VandeHei a lesson that would later form the architecture of Smart Brevity.

This structure consists of four parts. First, a muscular tease—a short, punchy headline or subject line that is provocative but accurate. Second, a strong first sentence. This is the single most important takeaway, the "One Big Thing" you want the audience to remember. Third, context, which is often signposted with the phrase "Why it matters." This brief section explains the significance of the information. And fourth, the option to "Go deeper," which provides links to source material or further reading for those who want more detail. This framework acts as a "straitjacket on your worst instincts," forcing the communicator to be disciplined, organized, and impactful.

The "One Big Thing" Principle: Distilling Your Message to a Single, Powerful Sentence

Key Insight 3

Narrator: In a world of endless distraction, you can’t expect your audience to remember five points, or even three. The authors argue that the most critical skill in modern communication is to identify and trumpet one single, memorable idea. Your first sentence is often your only chance to convey what someone needs to know and convince them to keep reading.

To master this, the authors suggest a simple exercise. After any meeting, interview, or event, immediately call a colleague or friend and tell them what happened in a single sentence. That gut-reaction summary is almost always the most important point. Our brains naturally identify what’s interesting, but we tend to bury that insight under layers of throat-clearing, caveats, and unnecessary background when we start to write formally. The goal is to capture that initial, crisp thought and put it front and center. Whether you're asking for a raise, updating a teacher, or pitching a project, starting with a single, strong sentence that declares your main point is the surest way to be heard and remembered.

Reclaiming the Workplace: Applying Brevity to Meetings and Presentations

Key Insight 4

Narrator: Nowhere is the pain of poor communication felt more acutely than in the workplace, particularly in meetings and presentations. Research shows that 90 percent of people admit to daydreaming during meetings, and 72 percent do other work. The principles of Smart Brevity offer a direct antidote. For meetings, the key is ruthless preparation and structure. Amazon’s Jeff Bezos famously banned PowerPoint, instead requiring that meetings begin with attendees silently reading a "narratively structured six-page memo." This ensures everyone is on the same page and the discussion is informed and focused. The book also tells the story of Karl Rove, who was late to a meeting in President George W. Bush’s Oval Office. Bush had the door locked, and Rove was never late again. The lesson: respect for time must be enforced from the top.

For presentations, the guiding principle is to "simplify to exaggerate." A McKinsey partner advises new hires to take their 20-slide deck and cut it down to just two. This forces a focus on the core message. Visuals should be clean, simple, and additive, not decorative. According to research by biologist John Medina, adding a compelling image can increase information recall to 65 percent, compared to just 10 percent for spoken words alone.

Winning the War for Attention: Smart Brevity in the Age of Social Media

Key Insight 5

Narrator: Social media is described as the "hand-to-hand combat of attention warfare." It is the most Darwinian environment for communication, where only the most concise and impactful messages survive. The principles of Smart Brevity are therefore essential. The key is to be ruthlessly selective and focus on a single, provocative message.

A perfect example occurred in 2020 when scientists discovered water on the moon. The official story lede was long and technical. A Smart Brevity approach, however, would have been a tweet that simply said: "Moon's wet." This is short, surprising, and makes the reader want to know more. Each platform has its own nuances—Twitter favors facts and urgent news, Instagram demands arresting images, and Facebook rewards a provocative spin. But across all of them, the core rules apply: use strong, simple words; be image-conscious; and give the audience value—an idea, a score, a laugh—instead of asking for something.

Beyond the Message: Building a Culture of Clarity

Key Insight 6

Narrator: Ultimately, Smart Brevity is more than a set of writing tips; it's a management philosophy that can transform an organization's culture. The authors learned from early mistakes at Politico that a lack of clear, consistent communication leads to gossip, confusion, and high employee turnover. At their new company, Axios, they made Smart Brevity central to their culture.

Co-founder Jim VandeHei writes a weekly internal newsletter called "5 Big Things," which clearly outlines the company's top priorities. This practice became contagious, with every executive creating a similar update for their own team. This system creates radical transparency and alignment. It eliminates wasted time in meetings because everyone has already read the updates. It fosters a sense of connection and purpose, which polling shows are the top reasons people stay in their jobs. By making crisp, authentic communication the default, an organization can build a more efficient, engaged, and high-performing workplace.

Conclusion

Narrator: The single most important takeaway from Smart Brevity is that conciseness is not a compromise on intelligence, but a demonstration of it. As a sign in the Axios newsroom reads, "Brevity is confidence. Length is fear." Being brief requires the confidence to know what truly matters and the discipline to cut away everything that doesn't. It is an act of respect for your audience, a recognition that their time is the most valuable currency they have.

The book's most challenging idea is that the hard work of brevity happens before you ever type a word. It forces you to think with ruthless clarity, to distill your own complex thoughts into a single, powerful idea. The next time you prepare to send an important email, give a presentation, or post an update, ask yourself: what is the one big thing I need my audience to know? If you can answer that in a single, strong sentence, you’re already on the path to being heard.

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