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On Writing

12 min
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A Memoir of the Craft

Introduction

Nova: Imagine this: it's 1973. A young high school English teacher in Maine has just thrown his manuscript into the trash. He's convinced it's no good. He's broke, he's discouraged, and he's ready to give up. His wife fishes those crumpled pages out of the garbage, reads them, and says, keep going. That manuscript was called Carrie, and it became Stephen King's first published novel. Today we're diving into the book where King tells that story and so many others: On Writing: A Memoir of the Craft.

Nova: Great question. It's both, and that's exactly what makes it so unique. Published in 2000, right after a van nearly killed him on a country road in Maine, this book is part autobiography, part toolbox, and part battle-tested advice from someone who has sold over 350 million copies. King himself opens by saying, "This is a short book because most books about writing are filled with bullshit."

Nova: It's this: writing is telepathy. King believes that when you write something and someone else reads it, you are literally transmitting thoughts across time and space. He demonstrates this by describing a specific image, a rabbit in a cage with a blue number 8 painted on its back, and says, see? I was in Maine in 1997 and you're wherever you are right now, but you and I are having a meeting of the minds. That's the magic he wants every writer to take seriously.

Vocabulary, Grammar, Style, and the Paragraph

The Writer's Toolbox

Nova: Let's talk about what King calls the writer's toolbox. He got the metaphor from his grandfather, who was a carpenter. The idea is that every writer carries a toolbox, and you need to know what's in it and how to use each tool.

Nova: Vocabulary and grammar. They're the common tools, the bread of writing. But here's where King gets really interesting about vocabulary. He says don't make any conscious effort to improve it. Use the first word that comes to your mind, if it's appropriate and colorful. He writes, "One of the really bad things you can do to your writing is to dress up the vocabulary, looking for long words because you're maybe a little bit ashamed of your short ones."

Nova: He absolutely does. He says nouns and verbs are the two indispensable parts of writing. Without both, no group of words can be a sentence. But his real passion is reserved for hating two things: the passive voice and adverbs. King writes, "Timid writers like passive verbs for the same reason that timid lovers like passive partners. The passive voice is safe."

Nova: It might be the most quoted line in the entire book: "The road to hell is paved with adverbs." King argues that when you write "He closed the door firmly," you're telling the reader you don't trust them to understand. The context should make it clear. And in dialogue attribution especially, he insists you stick with "he said" or "she said." He points to Larry McMurtry as the gold standard for this.

Nova: He admits he does, and he says when he does it, it's for the same reason any writer does it: because he's afraid the reader won't understand him if he doesn't. That's the whole point. Fear is at the root of most bad writing. The adverb, the passive voice, the over-explanation, they're all symptoms of not trusting yourself or your reader.

Nova: The next layer is style, and then, crucially, the paragraph. King makes a surprising argument here. He says the paragraph, not the sentence, is the basic unit of writing. It's "the place where coherence begins and words stand a chance of becoming more than mere words." He compares paragraphs in fiction to a musical beat rather than a melody. They should form naturally as you write.

Nova: Exactly. King says the single-sentence paragraph is powerful because it resembles talk more than writing. And here's the line I love: "Writing is seduction. Good talk is part of seduction." He wants your paragraphs to breathe, to vary, to keep the reader engaged. Easy books have lots of short paragraphs and white space. Dense books filled with ideas have a more substantial look. Both can work, but you have to learn the beat.

The Two Non-Negotiables

Read a Lot, Write a Lot

Nova: If there's one piece of advice from On Writing that gets quoted more than any other, it might be this: If you want to be a writer, you must do two things above all others: read a lot and write a lot. There's no way around these two things. No shortcut.

Nova: He absolutely does. He talks about reading four to six hours a day, every day, and he says if that sounds strenuous, you might not actually enjoy this enough to pursue it. He reads everywhere: waiting rooms, theater lobbies before the show starts, checkout lines, and he notes, everyone's favorite, the bathroom.

Nova: Right. And here's the counterintuitive part: King says bad books often teach you more than good ones. When you read something terrible, you think, I could do better than this. It's encouraging. But good writing teaches you about style, graceful narration, plot development, and truth-telling. Every book has its own lessons. He goes so far as to say that one terrible novel is worth a semester at a good writing school.

Nova: It's famously disciplined. He writes every morning, seven days a week, including holidays and his birthday. His goal is ten pages a day, which comes out to about two thousand words. At that pace, he can finish a 180,000-word book in three months. He says the first draft of a book, even a long one, should take no more than three months, the length of a season.

Nova: King has one of the best descriptions of those days I've ever read. He says, "Sometimes you have to go on when you don't feel like it, and sometimes you're doing good work when it feels like all you're managing is to shovel shit from a sitting position." Stopping a piece of work just because it's hard, either emotionally or imaginatively, is a bad idea. If you don't write every day, he says, the characters begin to stale off in your mind. They begin to seem like characters instead of real people.

Nova: And his writing space matters too. He advocates for a humble room with a door you're willing to shut. No phone, no TV, no video games. He writes, "Put your desk in the corner, and every time you sit down there to write, remind yourself why it isn't in the middle of the room." Life isn't a support system for art, he says. It's the other way around.

The Case Against Plotting

Stories Are Found, Not Made

Nova: Okay, this is where King gets genuinely radical about the craft. He doesn't believe in plot. In fact, he writes, "Plot is, I think, the good writer's last resort and the dullard's first choice."

Nova: He makes a crucial distinction between story and plot. Story is honorable and trustworthy; plot is shifty. King believes stories are found things, like fossils buried in the ground. The writer's job is to dig them up as intact as possible using the tools in the toolbox. You don't manufacture a fossil, you uncover it.

Nova: He starts with a situation, not a plot. He puts a group of characters in some kind of predicament and then watches them try to work themselves free. He doesn't worry about the ending because, as he says, sooner or later every story comes to an end. The characters drive the action, not the other way around.

Nova: Exactly. He says the most interesting situations can usually be expressed as a what-if question. What if vampires invaded a small New England village? That's Salem's Lot. What if a policeman in a remote Nevada town went berserk? That's Desperation. He starts with the situation, introduces the characters, and then narrates. He says he wants characters to do things their way, not his.

Nova: That's exactly the effect he wants. And it ties back to his philosophy about rewriting. The first draft, he says, should be written with the door closed. You're telling yourself the story. No one else is looking. It's intimate. Then, when you rewrite, you open the door. Your main job becomes taking out everything that is not the story.

Nova: Yes. An early editor gave him that formula and it stuck. Second draft equals first draft minus ten percent. Kill your darlings, kill your darlings, even when it breaks your egocentric little scribbler's heart, kill your darlings. After finishing the first draft, King recommends putting the manuscript away for at least six weeks before you touch it again. That distance lets you see the forest instead of the trees.

Nova: It does. But he says when you come back, the experience is strange and often exhilarating. You can finally see what the book is actually about. The recurring elements, the themes that emerged without your conscious intention. Then you sharpen those, cut what doesn't belong, and polish. King says for him, the answer has always been two drafts and a polish. That's it.

Why On Writing Almost Didn't Exist

The Accident and the Aftermath

Nova: There's a reason On Writing has a final section called "On Living." On June 19, 1999, Stephen King was walking along Route 5 near his summer home in Maine when a blue Dodge van came over a hill. The driver, Bryan Smith, wasn't looking at the road. He was turned around, pushing his Rottweiler away from a cooler full of meat in the back seat.

Nova: King writes that he had maybe three-quarters of a second to register what was happening. He thought, My God, I'm going to be hit by a school bus. Then he was thrown fourteen feet through the air and landed in a ditch. His lower leg was broken in at least nine places. His spine was chipped in eight places. Four ribs were broken. His scalp was gashed open. His right knee was split almost directly down the middle.

Nova: The surgeon told him his leg below the knee had been reduced to, in King's words, "so many marbles in a sock." It took five marathon surgeries to put him back together. And for a long time after, he couldn't write at all. He told NBC, "After the accident, I was totally incapable of writing. At first it was as if I'd never done this in my life. It was like starting over again from square one."

Nova: July 24th, 1999, five weeks after the accident. He didn't want to. He was in a lot of pain and couldn't sit for more than forty minutes at a time. But he started again anyway. His wife Tabby set up a makeshift desk for him in the back hall. He wrote about an hour a day at first, and eventually worked his way back. The book we're discussing, On Writing, was the first book he published after the accident.

Nova: Exactly. And that's what gives the whole thing its weight. When King says writing is magic, when he says the water is free so drink, he's not being glib. He's speaking as someone who almost lost the ability to do the thing that makes him who he is. In the postscript, he writes that things continued to get better. He found his way back. And the book ends with that sense of gratitude, of hard-won wisdom.

Nova: He pleaded to a lesser charge of driving to endanger. He received a suspended six-month jail sentence and lost his license for a year. King writes about it with remarkable restraint. What's haunting is that King says when he heard Smith's story about the dog and the cooler and the Mars bars, it occurred to him that he had nearly been killed by a character right out of one of his own novels. He writes, "It's almost funny."

Conclusion

Nova: So what do we take away from On Writing? I think the first thing is that writing is work. Glorious, magical, sometimes miserable work. King demystifies the craft without draining it of wonder. He gives you the toolbox, tells you to show up every day, and reminds you that the scariest moment is always just before you start.

Nova: And don't forget the fundamentals that King hammers home. Read a lot. Write a lot. Avoid adverbs and the passive voice. Use simple, honest language. Write the first draft with the door closed, rewrite with the door open. And above all, take the blank page seriously. As King puts it, "You must not come lightly to the blank page."

Nova: I think that's exactly right. And I'll leave listeners with one final quote that I think captures the spirit of the whole book. King writes, "Writing isn't about making money, getting famous, getting dates, getting laid, or making friends. Writing is magic, as much as the water of life as any other creative art. The water is free. So drink."

Nova: This is Aibrary. Congratulations on your growth!

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